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So, for all readers me giving a high rating, Lemme tell u it is an honest review that I am giving after reading chapter 1. Honestly, I was just here to check this book, as the author asked me to. I don't like romance, so historic books are a yes to me. I read it, and Lemme tell you what I noticed. The starting was kinda off. I didn't know why the father sent his girl, at age of 7 as a maid. idk if they were financially broken, which I may have overlooked, but it didn't make any difference though. While reading, I did find some paras, which were too long, and could be shortened using ; and , The first chapters had no triggers for me. I mean, no betrayal, no revenge, no isekai, no NTR. I was a much more common situation, I could agree on, and I won't be surprised to see this being practised irl. So, I haven't read the synopsis yet, and I don't know the plot. But, I think it's the boy taking care of his family. (I read just chapter 1, so if I messed up, leave me alone) ugh..... this is getting long.... I would also ask you to not mix up languages... Umma- was mother... then Oppa- brother.... I don't know korean much, but I know Unna is aunt.... so I got cunfused, and I haven't checked it so again , I may not be right. the sentence were be robotic, and with some insight, they can be improved. ugh.... my brain cells died, after wrtiing this long review. well now you won't think it as a spam. Enjoy this story, I am adding this to my collection, which I often don't do while reading th first chapters... I can't say that I loved thale plot, but yeah! I liked it. Good luck with your writing.