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The idea behind the novel sounds interesting. Writing quality: In dire need of a editor. I have trouble following most if not all sentences if i don't retranslate it in my head. Updates: No problems from me here Story development: Since i've only read 5 chapters or so... the idea behind it is interesting. Development so far has been good too. Char design: Really can't say much about it. Background: Needs to be more fleshed out. What kind of houses? how do the streets look? How does the tavern look? How does the book store look? It's all left open and not explored. Further comments: Sounds like a BL novel after reading a few chapters so i dropped it there. Not sure if it is a BL novel or not as there is no BL tag. But from the few things i read it sounded gay. As such i dropped it since it is not my cup of tea. If you are into either BL or maybe a strong bromance try it. (a really strong sounding bromance) Give it a try but be prepared for less then stellar grammar.