Review Detail of Morikubo in please reset the booktitle Quartermaster 20231218092329 28

First, the world you set up was good as far as the technicalities involved. Second, the different POV's from invaders/colonizers adds a unique depth to the plot of the story. Lastly, including politics can be a little bit tricky but depending on how you handle it, it'll add a lot more to the story itself. Grammar, pacing, characters are the downsides for me although it can be easily fixed later down the road. Also try fleshing out the structures of the empire.