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DolanTramp
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Ehh i only read up to the naruto part and it was not really well done. - Full of mistakes (every 3rd sentence had at least one typo), the worst one was a sentence with 4 typos that the author copy pasted into the next chapter as well. - follows the story with the excuse "Dont wanna grab attention to Naruto" (the only changes are a female naruto/ kurama and yandere naruto loving him and we all know why.. horny author. Btw he kept making sexual nuances at a 6 year old naruto and i quote "hourglass figure") --> it was basicly "weak naruto", Graduation, Mizuki stealing arc, team with only 2 people without any explaination.., bridge arc (as support) and most of it is like the anime - makes everyones iq around the mc lower and made zabuza a 15 year old with anger problems - reads too many chinese novels. (made Naruto be like the anime naruto until the graduation so that he/ she can suprise everyone and thinks its funny) (also thinks that doing a dance in the fight against zabuza is entertaining/ funny..) - system thats too op (basicly omnipotent without many explainations)

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The Strongest Supporting and Main Character in the Multiverse

Ken_Uzumaki

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DolanTramp
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Yandere Hinata*

Ken_Uzumaki
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Thanks for the review