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Review Detail of Ynna_Britannia in Two Lives, One System

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Whoa! That was an exciting and fun read~ 💖 Despite being written in the Third Person POV, the author was still able to narrate the story in a way that has “personality.” This enhances the reading experience of the readers as it spices up a large part of the novel. The main character Kanae is likeable; she’s funny and relatable. This is the first time I’ve read a novel with a female lead having a “System” that has a goal of making the player a “mother,” I think that’s a fresh idea for a plot. It reminds the readers that it would also shine some focus of Romance, but might not be the immediate focus. It only has 6 chapters so far, but I think the Author knows exactly how to direct the novel. It’s not fast paced, nor was it too slow either, just right to keep readers on wanting more. I’m excited to read more about the characters, the world, and the system in the chapters to come. ✨ Great job, Author Natsume! 🥂 Keep it up, and more power to you~! 👏👏👏

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Two Lives, One System

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Many thanks ♥ ♥ ♥