the writing quality is great, and I like it very much. Your first-person point out of view is amazing, and I enjoy it very much. the development so far is quite nice for me, as I like a fast harem, but this is not too fast not too slow. the other characters are well thought out like what the other guy said here, and that's great for me, but the MC's attitude changed from revenge thirsty to being a happy guy is quite fast, no? but then, any man would feel happy if they ****ed a woman and the woman loves them back. The stability of updating is quite... random, but now you have fixed that! and I'm okay no matter what, thank you fort he chaps as always. the background of the world is not so clear, but now it seems that it's the background on the universe, since there are other worlds. I'm hooked and excited, can't wait for more!
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