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2020-12-21 07:52

I gave you ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ in every thing. WHERE ARE YOU, come and continue it u Said 1 month it's already 2months. PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEeeEEEeeeeeeeeeeeE

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The Author here! I will make it clear for anyone who expects anything! First no harem. I have not even thought which character to use as a love interest. If I really decide to do it, it will be Bi Ji, the Emerald Swan. And the plot might feel fast for the first 20 chaps but it will be reasonable as he is a spirit beast and there will be a lot of time skips...for the first 20 chaps or so he will be getting power. He will try and be a strong spirit beast. I plan to make him involved in plot events of DD1 which is only like 50 years away from the main plotline so that's why I am making him reasonably strong. I also try to make my writing better though English is not my first language, I promise you won't feel uncomfortable reading it. There may only be mistakes regarding commas or there maybe more but hey I am not perfect. I will try and add much humour as possible to make it enjoyable for you. So let's make the comment box and reviews as peaceful as possible. I hope if you have complaints regarding the novel, I hope you comment it here. I will be checking it always and try to get back at you always. Also I REQUEST of you STRONGLY that please comment what you think about certain paragraphs in the story. I hope that you will try and make the comment box as lively as possible. Because personally, when I see those comments I feel glad that at least someone is enjoying them, they act as a motivation to me. Be it fair criticism or praise I will be there to answer you! I may have missed something but if you wanna know something just fill the reply box below!

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