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straythoughtLv24yr
2020-07-26 03:28

I really enjoyed reading this and I hope new chapters come soon! I get tired of a lot of system books or I've got a gramps, or whatever. This book is a great reimagining. I just hope Alex rises to the occasion. A speaking part for Barney would also be nice!

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Overall great novel, I like the pacing, although a bit fast the novel is just beginning so it is to be expected. The quality of writing is excellent for webnovel, which is definitely a very good grasp on English and its utilisation. The stability of updates is good, seeing at the novel just like a day or 2 ago and its already at 5 chapters. The story as I said before is developing a bit fast but I like the powers being introduced and the flow so far. The world background is a bit lacking but it seems to just be plain old Earth with some other things, so it doesn't need the most expansion. (although I'd like to learn more about Mr 9 Eyes Pyramid) Now my only issue with this novel, the main character, every other character I am fine with, no joke, although the cast is a bit small right now, but the main character, he just irritates me. The guy is so dumb if I asked him what was 1+1 and I asked his dog what was 5x6+10÷1.3 the dog would not only answer me first, but his answer would be correct, while the main character would, scream at me asking me why I asked him that, then say how I am trying to advertise a brand, then shout at me some more, and then proceed to answer, albeit wrongly, and then he'd had taken so long, that he'd have forgotten what the question is and get mad out of embarrassment, and just shout out "I don't know, what do you think I am? A nerd?" and then proceed to watch scooby doo. His personality overall irks me, but its tolerable, I mean every character starts off somewhere so hopefully the author is just leaving some room for growth. (really though I bet his dog barney would be better than him at math, you can quote me on that by the way) Overall good novel though, so I suggest you join in while its just beginning.

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