Review Detail of Mffidan in Thorny Violet Rose

As a new author, I feel that my novel is ALMOST PERFECT. Almost, because I know that I make lots of mistakes when I am writing and I'm not even aware some of them. Still, I'm trying something new to me. I'm struggling, trying to express perfectly images in my head, searching some words and meanings like mad and changing the course of events continuously. But it's exalaring, existing and fun to me. I have the big picture in my head and filling the blanks while learning is my job. Though when I am writing, I feel that the script gets out from my hand and then I found I wrote different things... I think, I need more control over events. I think the pace is normal because I plan to keep on writing. Still let me know if it's too slow. Anyway, please give some reviews and points my mistakes while enjoying the story of Rose ;)