Review Detail of Antalo in My Adventures In The Multiverse

This is basically everything i dislike about Wish fics in a nutshell its a terrible concept that more often then not leaves 50% of your readers feeling "well thats a dumb wish" or "well theres no story now hes too OP" im a firm advocate that if your giving you MC a power it must be something that he doesn't choose but has to make the best of Gamer is great for this allows diversity and the writer to develop at whatever pace is good for them, this fic however takes the 2nd wish example to its pinnacle with no character design, no real story development because in reality there is nothing that can challenge him, the only thing this gets 5 stars on is because its piggybacking off of a really well fleshed out series of story backgrounds thats it. In Summery - Terrible Story because plot dies in Ch-1, Terrible Character Development because there is flat out none I hope other Writers and the Author of this fic themselves understand what im trying to say when i say Wish fics note i do not mean "wish fulfillment" that is a totally different can of worms and can be accomplished by making it a challenging path but totally achievable, but my main point is yeah MC too powerful too quick and terrible plot and Character development