Your translation or in this case grammar can be improved by using a dictionary but overall great. I'm giving 4 stars. Updating stability is nice but try updating more often to make this book alive once more so 4 stars to that. Story development was a enormously good. It has it's own timeline and a little bit following canon in a strange way I see fit. So 5 stars to that. Character design was unique. Your mc is very observant and cautious and his usage of quirks is splendid. OP as people always says here. Don't change that personality and design of his cause that's makes him as I said, UNIQUE. Five stars to that too World background was the same as canon. It's the same world after all but he changed the world and its character slowly and that is the great feat for an author like you. GOOD JOB! 5 STARS ONCE MORE. in over all 4.6 stars. Nice for a starter like you. Don't insult yourself by just saying your not good in English cause that is nice way of speaking it. Everybody can learn english well. You can teach yourself by reading and watching American or European novels or movies to improve it. Just don't stop making stories. Adding this to my library, Me.
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