Review Detail of drefond in Lightning Is the Only Way
Review detail
my first impression of the story and that it lacks experience and care in its development, but that the author has a lot of reading baggage (I recommend reading some Korean novels, they have many good works on this escalation from the lower world to the upper), he it avoids errors that I am tired of reading. it is worth following at least until his rise to the intermediary world and see if the errors that bothers me in the work will change.Writing Quality: ok, very decent you are well located and you know what is happening, just stop repeating information that we already know (he has experience you don't need to repeat it so many times he has a stronger body we already understand that too)Stability of Updates: I don’t know, I started reading yesterday (and I’m finished (chap 96)) But I think 2 a day and very good stories need more thought which is one of the problems of this workStory Development: it has its problems, like out of hours or very sudden team skips but its ok, the problem comes in the gain and development of the intention to kill that could be more worked and more challenging because it just comes out of nowhere, it fights and it improvement he suffers and it improves happens very fast without a real challenge for something that should only grow with a life or death challenge, the fights with demonic beasts in the beginning of the story only occurred because he is absolutely sure that he will not die not only because he has experience (at least it seemed like this for me) the animals are treated as if they were stupid / arrogant (or as you call them "inexperienced") which is not a characteristic of animals but of humans (cats have fought once in their lives try to get close to a cat that you don't know or dog, there are those that will accept the approach but in the majority they will have some reaction or alert or withdrawal they will not just ignore you).
Lightning Is the Only Way
Warmaisach
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Character Design: within the context of the history of the heavens trying to soften the protagonist they are ok, outside of that context they are very simple and one-dimensional, they are good or bad or dumb. World Background: if you take into account heaven as a background, it is bad, since heavens change too much and have a lot of influence in history, but I consider heaven as they persist too strong and too influential, so the world is interesting and credible. I hope that the influence of the heavens in the world will diminish in the intermediate and high worlds because of the influence of the opponents and more powerful beings, (from here the opinion of the person with experience of the reader) I also feel that a lower launch rate with a greater amount of text it would help in parts where the author’s influence is obvious, not as a chapter with twice as many words, but I think that 5 chaps per week with 1.5 of the amount of text in the current chapters would give you much more time to think, organize and put on "paper" what you want to pass on to readers, based on my reading works with more space between releases are usually better because of the review. this whole review and my whole opinion and it only serves as another point of view since reading and writing are different things and I'm sure that parts that look good when writing are loose points when reading (I remember today about a text I wrote that the protagonist's mother died and immediately in the next paragraph said that she called him)
Thank you for your review. I don't want to be mean, but it was difficult to understand what you wanted to say, due to the english, but I think I got it. I am always happy about constructive criticism. Though, I had to delete the middle part of your "3 comment review" since it had major spoilers in it, without a spoiler warning. The other two didn't have spoilers, so I am fine with them remaining. Thank you anyway for your review.
is that I don’t speak English, I don’t put the tag because it usually gets too big and no one besides the author reads it (usually).
Warmaisach:Thank you for your review. I don't want to be mean, but it was difficult to understand what you wanted to say, due to the english, but I think I got it. I am always happy about constructive criticism. Though, I had to delete the middle part of your "3 comment review" since it had major spoilers in it, without a spoiler warning. The other two didn't have spoilers, so I am fine with them remaining. Thank you anyway for your review.