Review Detail of BlackFluteofLove in THEM!

That was a commendable start. The way the author narrated the first chapter, it surely grabbed my attention!! It was so powerful!! The story, the boy with gray eyes... it's all so captivating that one is forced to keep reading further. And the narration is like a cherry on top... great work author!! The only thing that interrupts the flow while reading is omission of certain words, that way the flow immediately breaks and one has to read it again to comprehend. But still one can understand without putting too much effort. The way you describe everything automatically generates the visual in my mind and I sooo love that!!! Cheers author!! Great work! I hope you get all the views and recognition you deserve!