Item: THEM!
Rating: 4.6
Author: maxyperson

maxypersonLv24yr

2020-11-10 17:25

I like the story so far. The MC is very relateable and I actually feel for her because I’ve had similar experiences of wanting to fit in, but not being able to do so because of strict parents. The book is able to hold my attention and reels me in to read more chapters. My only critique is that there are some grammar errors and misuse of commas. It’s still worth the read though.

THEM!

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oluna15Author

well noted. thanks.

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