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iam_adh
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This is a very interesting story. I like the plot, I like the background, and I like the way how the first chapter pulls a reader in. Some things I hope would improve is the grammar and the world background. If some things could be explained more that would be very helpful. Another thing is the grammar, it's not bad per say, but it does slow me down.

THEM!

oluna15

Liked it!

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Snowflake5
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