Review Detail of Harley_Wegner in The Rising Of The Shield Devil

the story is all over the place, dont know where he is what his abilities are really. suddenly takes raphtalia and someone just leaves an egg at his door that happens to hatch and it turns into filo immediately. i could only read a fourth of this so called story but i couldn't continue anymore of it.. it had a good premise and the idea was great but pacing is bad and development of the characters and world is nonexistent, and writing quality is terrible