Condensed review from an experienced reader (I've read most translated novels): Meh, average. Read this if you have nothing else to read. The idea is novel but nothing too exciting. World building is a disaster (we've seen nothing aside from his pc and his university). It's too early to comment on character development but haven't see any yet. Story feels very slow paced and for now there is 0 action.
Darkness Black Bear
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LIKEValven:Completely disagree. Your review really states how inexperienced you truly are.
Valven:Completely disagree. Your review really states how inexperienced you truly are.
Blacklotus:and wow you're quick to get to the offensive to a random stranger on the internet
Try make some real reviews before commenting, all I can see, aside from rare cases, is spam. Demonstrates how immature you truly are.
Valven:Offensive? Looks like you are also new to the internet.
Blacklotus:Try make some real reviews before commenting, all I can see, aside from rare cases, is spam. Demonstrates how immature you truly are.
From your review i can see that you didnt even make it past the first 20 chapters or you would know that he stops attending university after it. If you Had bothered to actually read the trial chapters you would had gotten a sense for what type of story and character he is building himself up to be. i will agree that world building so far isnt the strongest in this novel, however, modern urban novels usually can get some leeway in this due to the setting just being the regular world. maybe you just arent into these types of novels and prefer fast paced ones that everything is laid out for you from the beginning.
Horizon:From your review i can see that you didnt even make it past the first 20 chapters or you would know that he stops attending university after it. If you Had bothered to actually read the trial chapters you would had gotten a sense for what type of story and character he is building himself up to be. i will agree that world building so far isnt the strongest in this novel, however, modern urban novels usually can get some leeway in this due to the setting just being the regular world. maybe you just arent into these types of novels and prefer fast paced ones that everything is laid out for you from the beginning.
Horizon:From your review i can see that you didnt even make it past the first 20 chapters or you would know that he stops attending university after it. If you Had bothered to actually read the trial chapters you would had gotten a sense for what type of story and character he is building himself up to be. i will agree that world building so far isnt the strongest in this novel, however, modern urban novels usually can get some leeway in this due to the setting just being the regular world. maybe you just arent into these types of novels and prefer fast paced ones that everything is laid out for you from the beginning.
I do actually prefer fast paced novels but for me a novel that doesn't hook me in 3o chapters its not a good novel
Horizon:From your review i can see that you didnt even make it past the first 20 chapters or you would know that he stops attending university after it. If you Had bothered to actually read the trial chapters you would had gotten a sense for what type of story and character he is building himself up to be. i will agree that world building so far isnt the strongest in this novel, however, modern urban novels usually can get some leeway in this due to the setting just being the regular world. maybe you just arent into these types of novels and prefer fast paced ones that everything is laid out for you from the beginning.
Funny how you expect me to pay 10 euros to read i novel i don't like. Are we even living in the same world?
Valven:Funny how you say it’s average after only reading 37 chapters.
That’s not the point. Novels of this caliber should be read fully at 60 to get a review. Besides that, you have your opinion and I have mine. Even if you hate that, just don’t read what I write, pointless arguing when this novel got picked, tons of positive reviews and credibility. Just stay away and next time, look up “offensive” and “immature” in a dictionary, because I sure as hell wasn’t any of them.
Blacklotus:Funny how you expect me to pay 10 euros to read i novel i don't like. Are we even living in the same world?
Valven:That’s not the point. Novels of this caliber should be read fully at 60 to get a review. Besides that, you have your opinion and I have mine. Even if you hate that, just don’t read what I write, pointless arguing when this novel got picked, tons of positive reviews and credibility. Just stay away and next time, look up “offensive” and “immature” in a dictionary, because I sure as hell wasn’t any of them.