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a_commonerLv51yr
2023-05-04 16:30

It's a pain to read with all the info dumping, but you can overlook that with skimming skills, the real problem aside from the slow pace and the story getting a little bit boring because of that, it's the translation. It's just switched like that to MTL shamelessly after the pay wall. I don't get the logic behind that. Shouldn't the premium chapters be even more quality!

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Er Muqi
4.4
514 Chs

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HeavenlyDeity
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I claim first to rate the novel, just the fact that its a faction development type system made me hooked, we need more novels like this, i the eternal celestial immortal approve of this novel!![img=update][img=fp][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=faceslap]

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Daoist_Butterfly
Daoist_ButterflyLv13

The cultivation in this novel follows the standard. Qi Gathering > Foundation Establishment > Ardorous Gold Core > Nascent Soul Stage > Immortal/deity. The protagonist reincarnated into the world from earth and spends hundreds of years cultivating to the core stage and then dying. He finds himself with a system but 'dead'. He uses his system to lead his clan to greatness. Good novel please support it.

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Fikre
FikreLv4

What the heck?! Why did you take this out of the trial read?! This is one of the best in the trial novel!!! Web Novel your making a big mistake, so please place this back on the trial read and then into the voting pool.

4yr
Misguided_Rooster
Misguided_RoosterLv5

Bland. Bland as heck. The dialogue is just weird and the sentences seemed forced. Info dumps don't help and the MC is basically a robot. It was a chore to read this.

4yr
Highwolf41
Highwolf41Lv14

TRANSLATION IS MTL DONT READ. TRANSLATION IS MTL DONT READ. TRANSLATION IS MTL DONT READ. TRANSLATION IS MTL DONT READ. TRANSLATION IS MTL DONT READ. TRANSLATION IS MTL DONT READ.

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BakedAf
BakedAfLv2

They really took it off the trials... Come on webnovel! Good book, premise is basically MC transmigrates, cultivates to Golden Core then dies and gets a system. Clan/Sect management. Interesting characters and the world building is pretty nice. If you want to continue reading, head over to MTLNovel. Sad I can't read a properly translated version but I guess that's Qidian for you.

4yr
ashokvinayak
ashokvinayakLv5

It is good and refreshing for a wuxia novel. The system is new and development pace is good too. The story is well balanced ................

4yr
jeremiahjust
jeremiahjustLv14

I am really enjoying a story where the "MC" can only influence things for his clan. Also the passage of time will be fun I think. The development of the first generation of kids is pretty good, and you get a sense this story has a solid foundation for the future.

4yr
GummyOfDoom
GummyOfDoomLv5

Not entirely new, but the novel has a fresh approach on xianxia story. Pacing is good. System is not overpowered. Enemy has a real feeling of danger which are commonly missing. Read till ch. 35. So Far, So Good.

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