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troutrun
troutrunLv54yr
2020-10-29 03:35

This is a transmigration story like others before where the MC takes over a body and has a knowledgeable spirit master to help guide him to cultivate. The interesting and enjoyable part of this story for me is where the MC takes a backseat and is more like an observer as the plot unfolds around him. The author does an excellent job of highlighting characters around the MC and provide very reasonable points of views for all the characters, even the villains. There are no young master drama, face slapping or unnecessary killing. SPOILER: I completed reading the raws for this story. After the wonderful first volume/arc, the story tanks for me. It becomes a harem focused, women chasing drama with all beauties (15+ ish) falling for the MC as he explore the world and gets involve with their dramas. The MC even gets his master, his personal disciple and her aunt, his not blood related sister and her master, etc... you get the point. The author admits at the end of the story that he made the change due to low subscriptions from the first arc and doubled the subscriptions after focusing on the harem, which is too bad because this could have been a unique and interesting story.

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B1u3mum_Tempest
B1u3mum_TempestLv2

😟☹thanks for the warning. The beginning was so good I was going to do the work to find the rest of the story. Now I won't. It makes me sad though, intelligent stories will have smaller numbers, at first. But they have staying power and grow by word of mouth. no new classics these days. Everyone loses faith in their story and audience. They abandon the intellectual for instant success and play to the lowest common denominator. Their stories dissappeare just as quickly. If they would stay the course...there is a hole in the market for intellectual stories. they grow slower but their fans are loyal and they last forever. Good stories never hide in the shadows forever. Eventually, everyone knows them. This is why all the original star trek originally got canceled before it got popular. Now look at the new star trek. How long's it gonna last. My bet, not long. so sad.

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Cat_King
Cat_KingLv5

This is an amazing story.... it feels alive unlike many others. Have you read a great book before? Like a book by Brandon Sanderson or someone similar? You see when you read their books you feel that their characters are alive... living and breathing and here the characters are just as alive, they almost come to life on text and paper. Through what we’ve seen so far they seem way better characterized than any book currently in the trial read and even on the entire platform! It’s hard to come up with a book to match up with its characterization. It’s these living characters that make this an amazing book to read. If I’m forced to put it in words it’s kind of like Kingdom’s bloodline in the way that the plot seems extremely well put and is thought ahead by the author although of course it isn’t as deep in politics and consequences as that monster of a novel which you should really read if you haven’t, but still it’s a very well thought book by the author here, you really can just tell by reading it that the author is certainly very skilled and well it certainly deserves a lot of praise from me at least. Okay now onto the second part of my review, let me address some of the issues... I guess firstly I think some people here worry if there’s a romance involved or even if there’s a harem so yeah let me disappoint those of you who don’t want any romance at all by saying yes there’s a romance, and well it’s a good one at least so don’t run away just yet. It’s a mutual thing, the romance; it’s grown in the story and well the Mc and female character let’s say is very compatible for one another and although I haven’t read into the raws I am fairly certain there won’t be any harem. If there is one I’ll be disappointed a little bit but still if the author can make it work I’ll be alright with it. Besides the romance which may put off some of you readers really this novel doesn’t have any major flaws. It’s fairly refreshing to the cultivation genre; it doesn’t share the many clichés of its many generic and boring fellow counterparts and well it’s intriguing and exciting which is very hard to achieve, well hard to find at least here on webnovel. So yeah as you can see from this long rambling review I really like this novel. It’s interesting, engaging and well just very exciting to read! You actually care about the people here and well goddamn if that isn’t amazing. Really try it! I swear to God you won’t regret it too much at least; I give my Cat King promise on that. So go on my fellow reader and thank you for reading this damn long winded review.

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