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LazyOracle
LazyOracleLv44yr
2020-10-03 22:53

So much lost potential in favor of games. The start was amazing with its promised focus of biology and history. but 40 chapters in the story in the real world has become more important that the story in the sandbox. I mourn for the lost potential.

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TheDolphin
TheDolphinLv13

The last 5 chapters are all in the Sandbox... After premium we see more Sandbox then rl

LazyOracle
LazyOracleLv4

I read upto chapter 50, i didnt like the fact the sandbox (original) became a game so i dropped it. other might like it but it dont, it doesnt match my personal tastes. adding of players ruins it imo

TheDolphin:The last 5 chapters are all in the Sandbox... After premium we see more Sandbox then rl
GLVI_h
GLVI_hLv4

Lol

LazyOracle:I read upto chapter 50, i didnt like the fact the sandbox (original) became a game so i dropped it. other might like it but it dont, it doesnt match my personal tastes. adding of players ruins it imo
Once_Upon_A_Time
Once_Upon_A_TimeLv4

Buddy, its called world building, no one wants just the background of a guy in his farm nurturing races. It going to be boring watching every single thing all of those races do, the story negates that and come back every time something becomes interesting.

Once_Upon_A_Time
Once_Upon_A_TimeLv4

It didn't become a game, it became a second world. The original sandbox isn't going to have interfaces and what not. They're probably going to live the way the normal indigenous bug people does. It makes it much more interesting because it ISN'T A GAME. He clearly stated that it was a second life. It also isn't privy to everyone, only people who attains acheivements.

LazyOracle:I read upto chapter 50, i didnt like the fact the sandbox (original) became a game so i dropped it. other might like it but it dont, it doesnt match my personal tastes. adding of players ruins it imo
Once_Upon_A_Time
Once_Upon_A_TimeLv4

Well, there are limited spots, you can't just distribute out to the entire world, of course, you can forget what I'm saying if the raws says that there are unlimited spots.

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HolyDragon17
HolyDragon17Lv4

I read further in the Raws now to the 400s. The script changes too much.. Author completely forgot about MC cancer and heroine has not showed up once..

FattyJay
FattyJayLv5

did you drop it? I'm in chapter 77 now, and it's making me sick how the author takes the story to players only. it's just just the way he started the story🤦🏿‍♂️

HolyDragon17:I read further in the Raws now to the 400s. The script changes too much.. Author completely forgot about MC cancer and heroine has not showed up once..
reader142356
reader142356Lv3

Heroin is forgotten? Perfect. The one flaw is finally gone

HolyDragon17:I read further in the Raws now to the 400s. The script changes too much.. Author completely forgot about MC cancer and heroine has not showed up once..
FattyJay
FattyJayLv5

someone deleted your reply on my comment, can you spoil a little bit bout the story?

HolyDragon17:I read further in the Raws now to the 400s. The script changes too much.. Author completely forgot about MC cancer and heroine has not showed up once..
ThyUnknownSaint
ThyUnknownSaintLv11

It's Polygamy. 2-3 girls are interested in him but nothing conclusive. I'm not surprised if it goes the Wang Lin route

reader142356:Heroin is forgotten? Perfect. The one flaw is finally gone
OtherworldlyLizard
OtherworldlyLizardLv3

You’ll be disappointed The mc doesn’t have any ambition and basically doesn’t want any power

reader142356:Heroin is forgotten? Perfect. The one flaw is finally gone
ultimatecoom
ultimatecoomLv3

his cancer got cured heroine is a hoe

HolyDragon17:I read further in the Raws now to the 400s. The script changes too much.. Author completely forgot about MC cancer and heroine has not showed up once..
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