Review Detail of Negative_Reviewer in Start With Contracting Sprites

Utter trash. It is written akin to a slice of life instead of a cultivation novel. The entire novel is a complete ripoff. It is nearly a carbon copy of Pokemon with the author somehow forcefully inserting a cultivation system into it. I read until chapter 20 when I couldn't take anymore. The main character is more obsessed with the apparent cuteness of something that looks like the picture I uploaded than getting stronger. You'd think he was a side character instead of someone who is going to become the strongest out there. Also how every character is a slave, literally, to their Pokemon is greatly disappointing. If you like a novel where the pet has more say than the owner then please go ahead and read this. The straw that broke the camels back was that there are now two (ch 17-20) dangerous criminals who killed other sprite trainers on the loose. The main character then promises his parents that he won't go to unnecessary places. LITERALLY A SECOND LATER he promises a friend to go to the secluded mountains and stay there for a great while and LO AND BEHOLD there they are, the two murderers. And obviously the main characters **** newborn sprite manages to defeat the hardened sprite which killed a sprite and trainer earlier. If this isn't bad writing then you could find enjoyment from reading the story in an alphabet soup. If you dare criticize this review simply because its one star then check the reviews of: parsawk SMomoTempest Drax990 My_path LNGourmet. This review actually talks about the content instead of simply rate spamming. Go to hell before only criticizing me and not them. You mindless 5 star spammers.