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PommyJosh
PommyJoshLv114yr
2020-09-01 21:03

Translation Quality - Decent from what I can tell from first impressions. Stability of Updates - Not sure yet, will wait until it is picked. Story Development - It feels like the author has taken a lot of inspiration from Pokemon, but set the story in a real world setting. From my initial read it feels like the story is well paced, by which it takes months rather than days for the MC to become powerful (But he still isn't the best even with the system). Character Design - The characters are quite refreshing when compared to some of the cliches that appear on this website. However, this story can feel like a Pokemon fan-fiction at some points. For example, the author uses different names but similar descriptions for the various Sprites, which can come across as weird and overly-long to read at times. World Background - From what I can tell it has a slice of life feel to it and the various places visited are appropriately described. The main setting so far involves school and the city, with the various other countries and organisations that are explained early on. Overall, a decent read but it would feel easier to read if the Sprite names were shortened to something more manageable (Just a personal Preference).

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