Review Detail of LeoAsimp_co in Fatal

I read quiet a bit of your story and all i can say is thst the plot is indeed very interesting, you have minor errors that can be fixed such as Using Commas, Exclamation mark and etc. I Can tell that the mc’s mind Is way beyond what society would portray as “normal” and i love how you show how his mind goes From reality to Fantasy. So Far its good Keep it up youve caught my interest.