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The novel has a good plot and promises to be an interesting read. I prefer to give honest reviews, so here goes :- I have read 5 chapters so far. The story is developing nicely. The stability of updates is good as I can see 28 chapters have been published. The character design is developing ok. Ava and Ben are (Chapter 5) still mysterious people. World background is equally good. Each chapter stops at a cliff hanger. The only thing that needs a relook are the grammar and proof reading, before posting. A few mistakes do not interfere with the flow of the novel but too many are not good. We all make mistakes, even I do. I would suggest that you download a grammarly or run your text through an online grammar checker. Please reread your chapter before posting. This is called proof reading or you can ask someone to read it for you. Writers sometimes do not see the obvious mistakes. I will be reading your book as it is saved in my library. All the best, Author!

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Thanks a lot for your wise words . Yes I will surely improve the grammar portions .