Review Detail of TheGolden_Ghoul in I Have A Quirk System In The My Hero Academia World

Hello! I am the author of the novel, and I’ve enjoyed writing so far. I plan to write more chapters, at least 3-4 a week. Currently (or as of the time of writing this), I have released the 3rd chapter. Feel free to give criticism as this is one of the few stories I’ve written. I want to improve, so if you could give me tips, I would be really thankful. Have a good time reading!