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NatsumeRikka
NatsumeRikkaLv54yr
2020-08-08 13:38

I had to give it a 5. Like damn. Been a while since I've been this impressed with a book. Writing quality: Pretty much awesome. I just love how the novel's being narrated. First pov is cool on it's own, but, this novel somehow made me feel more close to Asura. Maybe it's all her stuttering and tsun-tsun behaviour. Author has a berry nice vocab, ngl. I couldn't point out much mistakes, there were hardly one or two glaring ones. Great job on the narration! And the descriptions too, so we'll written! Stability of updates: From what I can see, author's been updating it regularly, so of course, I'll give a five for this as well. *But I will say, PLEASE UPDATE MORE!!!* Story development: Honestly, it was just a bit slow in the beginning. But that was because the Author took time to make us understand Asura's backstory. She also clarified what Asura felt, and dropped some good hints, letting our imagination run wild~~ Sometimes they turned out as expected, and other times.. Very different XD Was always a pleasant surprise to me though. Anyway, the execution of plot is very smooth, and I quite look forward to what's gonna happen next! (currently on ch 19 and the cliffy is killlingggg meeeee) Character design: If there was a 10 star option, I would've given that. MIND-BLOWING work. Author made me speechless with the work she's done on character designing. At first glance it seems a bit clichéd, but then the depth provided by Asura and Lancera's backstory... (though Lancera's backstory hasn't been elaborated on yet, I assume it'll be made clear in the future). It just helped me imagine them better. Especially the part where Asura first got to know about her love for compliments. It was relatable, yet not. The turning point of her life, I'd say. Also, so far, Asura's character is a bit hard to decipher. Is she an otaku? An ojou-sama? A tsundere? An egoist? Or all of the above? **: Lancera sounds like a potential yandere, I agree with Asura on this. World Background: Aight. This was well described from the first chapter itself. Starting with the description of classes, to the society's hierarchical system, to their prejudice for gay love. World building isn't slow, but it's not rapid either. More of a go with the flow type. I'm enjoying it. Small details being unraveled here and there. Though.. I'm not sure whether to call it modern or medieval since they got tech but still have this monarch system. With this, I end my review. I never expected to find such a gem. Support the author 100%.Will vote when I get my ** lol. Thank you for the chapters! And looking forward for more!~ I'll probably binge read the next 10 chaps Mhm. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

The Villainess and her Victim

_VA_
4.8
91 Chs

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NatsumeRikka
NatsumeRikkaLv5

Etto.. The ** = the letters P and S btw, since WN is censoring them for some reason XD

4yr
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Marsuru
MarsuruLv1

I kinda like the story it was awesome Though!

4yr
Other Reviews
_VA_
_VA_Author

Other stories with villainesses almost always have the main character as the villainess who isn't actually that much of a villainess... So, what about a story of a villainess is the love interest, and the main character who is a prideful, narcissistic tsundere? XD Hope y'all enjoy this novel and tell me what you think! Make sure to check out my main novel too~ Tools of Slaughter: Story of a Human

4yr

NelisPurrrrrs
NelisPurrrrrsLv2

A very fluffy novel with a huge tsundere protagonist where the actions between her and the FL just makes you melt like chocolate under campfire. For those who like to use Scribblehub more the story is also available to read on the website: https://***.scribblehub.com/series/162470/the-villainess-and-her-victim/

4yr
ArchbishopOfSloth
ArchbishopOfSlothLv10

The only word to describe this novel is ' Great '. Characters are really flawed and they made story alive. Both FLs are really great. Story's progression is too slow and their thoughts pictured the whole novel into great read. I read chapters continuously. Each chapter hooked me up and character made me stayed. In my opinion, this is one of the best Romance novels as far as I know.

4yr
AuthorVelist
AuthorVelistLv1

I Like The Story The Characters Personality I hope it gets Updated soon... 😀😀😀😊😀😊😊😊😊😀😊😀😊😊😀😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

4yr
NoWoRRyMaN
NoWoRRyMaNLv14

I don't know what to say so I will just spout some random nonsense here, feel free to ignore me. The characters are amazing, like really really amazing. The main character, Asura reminds me of author herself... cough cough...I didn't say anything. So as I was saying the FMC is so fun, her thoughts are awesome. I already like her (not more than Lancera) Lancera is my favourite, and I think she will stay my favourite till the end of this book (I just hope nothing happens to her) Great yuri story even though Yuri is yet to come. Author please give some smut...cough cough...only some is fine. It's only because I want to see Asura reaction. I have no other lewd purpose, I swear. Good luck author a nd gimme some yuri smut.(◍•ᴗ•◍)(◍•ᴗ•◍)

4yr
Diamond_Air
Diamond_AirLv11

Ooooo, I love this book already XD. Really funny and relatable -_-... too relatable. Imma stick with this one till I settle... hmm... Should I choose Asura or Lancera? XD reading reading reading!!

4yr
Yumbrella
YumbrellaLv3

wow its really hard to find any faults in this novel..its really short and really really sweet. I fear diabetes XD. Just two characters and most of other characters are not given importance but guess what, The two characters in here are so sooo good that even another novel with hundreds of developed side characters cant even hope to compete with this novel. Although i wanted mooooaaaaar chapters i guess this story ended quite nicely. I loved it and welp thank this novel for killing my apprehensions towards girl's love...

3yr
WangLin
WangLinLv13

I like the characters povs the world background is decent but not amazing but i like the story in general and hope you can not rush it and finish it it will be a first for me with a non short story yuri on webnovel

4yr
chaaaaaaaa_XD
chaaaaaaaa_XDLv10

omg this is so cute imma cry T . T this is so worth to read bruh so cute and fluffy their reactions are cute especially asuuu~ im waiting for more updates thank you author ❤️

4yr
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