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I rarely write a review and I can say confidently that I’ve never written more than 5 reviews. But I will write one for this story ‘cause I really like it. So far, there’s no problem with the grammar. The story itself is very good and I really like how the story is progressing. Not too fast but also not too slow. I see a lot of potential but I’m also afraid that this story might not last long. After all, very well written stories are, most of the times, hard to continue. The author has to keep the expected quality consistent and most of the times. And if he couldn’t do it, the story would, of course, lose viewers. Anyways, I’m just saying that this novel is really good. I hope the author would keep on working to make this story better.
A New World, an immersive game experience
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Thanks for the review. I can't promise anything yet, But I feel I will continue this for quite some time. At least until I feel my writing is at a professional level. Then I will start with another story and try to end this one nicely. This is of course if my studying doesn't clash with my writing, as I need at least 3 hours a day just for this. So hears hopping to no clashing. :) Also, please do comment if you feel my writing is slacking. I often can't pick up on it, since I am ahead of what I am publishing. Causing me to read it not as a fresh read. Thus I often miss these things, or I feel I do. Thanks again.