Review Detail of Breuno in A New World, an immersive game experience

is there romance?

Let me put it like this. There isn't romance but their will likely be relationships. If that makes sense. Romance won't be the focus, but will exist since it's weird to not let it be. It will come later and hopefully naturally and not forced. The start is a bit weird as I just started writing and didn't have a direction yet.

hey there i will give your novel a read but if he ends up finding some bunny chick 10 chaps in then i will be sad

Thanks for the laugh No bunny chick,

sounds kinda like real life. one a person moves past the friendship phase, then even if they separate for whatever reason and "say" they are only friends - they really aren't, since they'll forever be in a relationship from that point on - no matter how delayed or avoided. just sorta human nature, and denial won't change it...for good or ill. 😕

Ah, so wild shameless author-sama and his 5/5 review has appeared. Just as webnovel tradition dictates :)

when are you going to release the rewritten chapters? Thought I would wait with reading until you did.

Can't remember that I said I was rewriting it. I don't really have time currently to do it. My days have been messed up with things at home. Leaving only nights to myself and my writing. Maybe Jan or Feb I will look at it, but I doubt I will do a full rewrite since I am still writing the story. Does not make sense to do both, at least to me. As such I will likely only do the first ten or so chapters if I do rewrite the start. Again I can't fully rewrite since I am still busy. And as such I can't edit (Remove and add) things as I feel will be better. This would ruin it for my current reader. Hope this makes it clearer to you. Also I am only now getting into a comfortable writing style. Having found my voice, not even long ago. Thus I would like to wait until that is more sound.

ok I understand. It says you are rewriting it in the synopsis of the book so maybe change that.

Oh, that is a misunderstanding. I just read it and realized it stated it weirdly. I meant I rewrote my synopsis. Will fix it now

Hmmmm. I would say, reverse that. When people start out as friends, then if there is a romance later, they might have a chance at a continued relationship of friendship. Without that, once the romance is done, the chances are high that they'll either have an acrimonious relationship or just never speak to each other again.

I hope the love interest isnt useless, always protected by the ML, Whiny and always cuasiNg problems (kidnapped or used against the ML). i want her to be funny, playful, but mature and serouis when the Situation calls for it. i jsut want them to have a chill and cool personality😅 Im just putting this out there, this is not my book and i respect that😁

I have no idea how she come over by the later chapters, but I am trying to make her strong. Just not really sure how to write romance

will it be harem

No

so my main concern is if it's like only one relationship or is he gonna have multiple over time. think that makes sense.

I honestly don't know. Up to now, chapter 200, there is no true romance. Still only hints at it. So that should explain that it really isn't the focus of the story, rather only a small part that exists but isn't explored much

yeah just wanted to know if he is only with one girl through out the story or he break up with one then dates some1 else later

dear there is way too much details reading these details want me to fall asleep so please do something