This is the author again, first I want to thank all readers that has been keeping up with my writing even though it can be annoying, for keeping up with my story, I did remember saying for a long time that the story was still in the formation stage but that's over now because now the real story has begun from here onwards its enjoyment galore, my writing is still lacking has I've not gotten an editor but the story has gotten a big step up, it has finally reached the stage I anticipated, thank you all and please continue to read and share you powerstones.

The book is well written and has a good plot but....... It is also really confusing with POV switches that doesn't tell who's perspective it is and keeps switching between characters. Author please fix this but other than that all is good keep up the work

I'm the author of this novel and will sincerely love to see you all reviews and opinions, I believe the novel has gotten nowhere yet, but i will really love to see reviews on the previous chapters, you power voting will go long way for me

Very poorly written novel. Please read over your work and do some editing / rewriting. I really tried to continue to read more but it's too confusing

ok this could be a really cool story if you stuck with the mc but you don't. I can't stand stories that do this. we read the synopsis and its about the mc not 10 other characters . give an example , the mc is in a school right now, we read a chapter and then 3 or 4 chapters pop up about a war before you get to the mc again. this totally ruins the flow of the story and I honestly have been skipping chapters to get back to the mc. I could care less about are war or a guild that the mc is not involved in and he has not interacted with any of the other characters except for the bully from earth. wth was the whole baldy thing, they gets called out of a pub by a kid, who the heck are they we don't know they just popped up..... anyway stick with the mc and only him unless the mc has contact with them.

I believe there is more where this came from. You should keep writing and it can only get better. Nice write up overall. Keep improving 👏🏾👏🏾

The synopsis looks interesting. Bookmarked to be binged later on ...............................................................................................................................................................

The book is well written and has a good plot but....... It is also really confusing with POV switches that doesn't tell who's perspective it is and keeps switching between characters

I will be revisiting the earlier chapters with time because of the frequent errors and the cumbersomeness, so bear for awhile, also this story involves a selfish and bad protagonist at the beginning who learns and grows to become better, so if you don't like your protagonist being imperfect from the beginning...probably not for you, this novel also has alot of other characters who have a role or the other to Play, plus I the novel is still in its foundation building stage, I haven't even plunged into the real package

This a nice novel with great prospect, I'll be pinning this and watch the author grow it before getting at it. Good work author but this still got a long way to go on my opinion