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Sigurd_Eldrich
Sigurd_EldrichLv134yr
2021-02-17 02:51

Why did you have to go and drop this novel you Wrote well but the story ended before it began it seems

Douluo Dalu: Sword Legacy

picaco
4.6
82 Chs

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ClearSkySage
ClearSkySageLv4

Really liking this fic, I love Duoluo Dalu and this fic has a lot of potential with me principally that Seraphin spirit I never really saw a fic about it, and thank god at least we can see the mc growing and not some I wish for an alternate dimension fic or I have 3 to 4 spirits fics I really like where this is going.

4yr

SinnerOfWebnovel
SinnerOfWebnovelLv3

If it's the sequel of your other fan-fic, it's bound to be good! If it's the sequel of your other fan-fic, it's bound to be good! If it's the sequel of your other fan-fic, it's bound to be good! If it's the sequel of your other fan-fic, it's bound to be good!

4yr
Primordial_Origin
Primordial_OriginLv2

Warning for future readers. This is already dropped-ish I guess because it wad technically finished just by a lot of several ending chapter being most summary. Anwway, I already said this on a comment but just so the Author can see it better... I dropped this due to the early chapters. Most of the readers probably did as well. Good concept just poor implementation. Really bad starting chapters. Not really bad bad in a literall sense, but just really frustrating so it makes it hard to continue reading. Starting chapters is very important for all literary piece because it builds momentum especially for the long ones like novels. I like the concept of the prequel as well but didn't read due to reviews which I would feel the same if I read it. Hope you continue writing but make sure to think about the actualization of the concept as well really hard. Seriously, what a shame for both of your Soul Land fics. All great concepts in my opinion just poor implementation. Good luck on your endeavours author. Hope I see and read another interesting concept fic or novel of yours.

3yr
Weirdo
WeirdoLv6

Five star review to up your star rating!!!!! Five star review to up your star rating!!!!! Five star review to up your star rating!!!!! Five star review to up your star rating!!!!! Five star review to up your star rating!!!!! Five star review to up your star rating!!!!!

4yr
Phoenix_Paradise
Phoenix_ParadiseLv5

Dead** thought his (or her) name was Picollo for a sec. Haven't started reading but I like the synopsis and the Doulou Dalu series so you get four stars.

4yr
FBI_48
FBI_48Lv14

If it's anything like treasured sword, I want to read it but I'm piling it to read a bunch when I have a free day.

4yr
its_me_your_boy
its_me_your_boyLv10

Original phone can copy this😁😋 • 🐘⃢⃢🦧⃢🦘⃢🐁⃢🦄⃢🐓⃢🐎 Original phone can copy this😁😋 • 🐘⃢⃢🦧⃢🦘⃢🐁⃢🦄⃢🐓⃢🐎 Original phone can copy this😁😋 • 🐘⃢⃢🦧⃢🦘⃢🐁⃢🦄⃢🐓⃢🐎

4yr
Wang_Luan_12_Gojo
Wang_Luan_12_GojoLv4

Very Good Story.Loved it.Character development is Good.Overall Excellent.

1yr
JUST_A_NORMAL_GUY
JUST_A_NORMAL_GUYLv5

Reveal spoiler

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