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amaturewriter
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20 FKing yrs before cannon and u follow cannon timeline. 20 fking yrs and nothing done. no world exploration, no character development, no arcs, training..nothing. I mean no childhood yrs, family interactions. nothing Also the ability, no offense but its weak....MC gets into dangerous situations and he gets stronger. whilst on paper this is OP in reality, its not advantages cause unless u survive and win, u really wont gain anything, and this only is uselful when u've already become strong......example: a marine commander with this ability is weak, its practically useless cause he'd get one shot from the strong and the wak really wont give him any experience.....it only works with power like vice admiral level, when MC has become a powerhouse.....I mean thats why goku got this **** after he was nearing planet busting lvl [ they got around freza arc, I think-and during that time they were OP] I am just annoyed at the wasted opportunity...20 yrs. and he is an SI with hunter parents....this dude had it all to become strong early on, like seeing how talented he was, he'd have been a god, cause of his SI knowledge would;ve been nice to see some World development and character interactions and new **** rather than a MC waiting for cannon to start and waste over 10 yrs

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KingBurger
KingBurgerAuthorKingBurger

This is my first book, I usually just read. This is an imalgamation of everything I like from what I have read in a story. Potential wise, I got no clue how to write so idk

amaturewriter:I like ur idea....like a lot...just annoyed at the wasted potential...plus its not like I can forget what I've read
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

**: the comedy is ****....I am not sure what was comedy but I didnt find anything funny....I assume u breaking the 4 th wall suppose to be funny, but i guess it was for me....4 th wall breaks in FF's is ****

KingBurger
KingBurgerAuthorKingBurger

Bro chill wtf, just for fun. Dont read if you dont want to lmao.

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

I like ur idea....like a lot...just annoyed at the wasted potential...plus its not like I can forget what I've read

KingBurger:Bro chill wtf, just for fun. Dont read if you dont want to lmao.