Review Detail of Lucy_Hunter6809 in My travels in multiverse

Item: My travels in multiverse
Rating: 4.2

Review detail

Lucy_Hunter6809Lv133yrLucy_Hunter6809

I like the idea and the worlds they are my favourite however the main character needs more depth he has a good mysterious background but his behaviour and thinking is erratic perhaps it's due to the instability of his wolf side and vampire side , but even though you need to describe his feelings and thoughts more , also the different pov is very constructive for the story I like how it gives a different image to the MC anyhow I like your story very much please continue updating

My travels in multiverse

Contractor_101

Liked it!

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Lucy_Hunter6809Lv13Lucy_Hunter6809

well the story is progressing very well and I can see your point about the MC I guess it will just become clear as the story goes on anyhow I am rooting for you

3yr

Contractor_101AuthorContractor_101

thats like the best review i have gotten so far in terms of summarizing my whole story up, as for the personality of mc being eccentric, its as you guessed but its also because i am not sure what kind of pwrsonality he should go by about now, originally he waa darkminded and death seeking because he had to protect his family but now that drive is lost and the vampire and wolf are heavily influencing him but that will pass and i will c oose a personality bordering on kindness and goodwill

3yr