Review Detail of Ancient_Egyptian in Transferred to the Monster World (HIATUS)

This is a review of the first arc, I will say that it is a good beginning but it has so much haste and a very good concept but your characters' emotion is just a mess of illogical response to different situations, you can not let them accept everything like it is normal to accept this kind of thing. you make them transport to a completely different world and the only reaction they have is that of surprise, no fear, no caution, no depression, no worry, no distrust, no anxiety, no loss, no panic, just some mild surprise and more than that you make them kill each other on the spot even though you add the parents of all students to the mix and the reaction of our group of friends is to run and hide and act normally until somehow you choose the MC girlfriend to betray them and kill them then when they wake up as a monster you make them again accept everything easily with just some worry about their status as if there previous life as humans don't mean to much for them then again you make them help an unknown monster like them even though she tried to kill them before like their sensibilities are not even existed and on top of that you make them forgive her easily again after they defeated her and again accept her reasons like some 5 years old kids, on top of that you make the princess'reaction to everything Exaggerated, even if there is Love at first sight, there is no reason for a Runaway princess to trust them let alone love him. in the end, you make such a good storyline but a very bad foundation.