Review Detail of WiLeYBiGhEaD in Game of Thrones: The Prideful One.

Not memorable. Seeing less than 10 comments on the final chapter as thanks to the author speaks volumes to the quality of this story. I have finished this story after dropping a couple of times, and it does do some things alright but not enough. The worldbuilding and character design is ok but lacking in many ways. The setting is important to any story and to often do fanfic authors take for granted that they are copying it from another work without re-establishing it on their own. There are many characters who are not introduced or explained in addition to locations. The biggest flaw that pervades this novel is the repetative use of Deus ex Machina and the forced plot elements. The author tries to add their own spice to the game of thrones world, but the execution is not very good and adds many Illogical plot holes. It is all very unnecessary, especially in the given setting. GOT fans want political drama, intrigue, kingdom building, romance, and wars. Not as much fantasy, gods, and especially good vs. evil. The beginning is a op mc reincarnation with wishes (** the kingdom building is all time skips and he gets nerfed)but 40 chapters in the author decides to alter the GOT world to a battle between the god of light and darkness who are toying with the MC. Literally the God of darkness and his champion could wipe out the mc who is now the champion of the god of light, multiple times but doesnt out of hubris. Again and again things happen for ‘reasons’ where logic and prior character molds are thrown out the window. Overall, if you are starved for GOT content then maybe you will like some of this but there is a reason so many people stopped commenting on this novel and its plot holes. They gave up and left.