Review Detail of H4ves in Game of Thrones: The Prideful One.

Good story, lets go first with the good points: - fast updates - creative - fast plot development(for those who like it) - constant changes in POV to show how the world is reacting to the MC and how the plot is moving Now with the things that i think could be better: - fast plot development(i don't like it) - the MC is too OP, with the things he acquired in his rebirth, there is almost nothing in westeros that could threat him *spoiler* he gains three powers, Captain America body, The ability to master any weapon that he touches, and the one i think its most OP, he can communicate and command all animals. In a world with krakens, dire wolves and bears this is too OP. He even make assassinations inside sieges with crows( in that chapter especifically i thought it was unnecessary, it seems that was made as a comic relief, but i still wonder how the crows made six people jump of the castle and kill themselves...) I don't know how he wasn't accused of witchcraft and chased beyond the walls yet. - character development, most fan-fics don't have to worry too much about this because the characters are already known to the public, the problem that i see here its because the personality of the MC is not very well explained, as it is too fast since he rebirths to when the plot starts to take place,we don't see much of his interactions with people, and because of this i didn't feel i knew his personality. - too much things didn't feel right to me *spoiler* he makes a lot of money from creating vodka and new kinds of alcohol, its okay and all but the problem is that he isn't even 10 years old yet, teoretically he hasn't ever even tasted alcohol, and i didn't saw nobody thinking that this is strange, they only say that he is a genius. CONCLUSION: Overall i think its a good story, it might seem as i didn't like it because of my emphasis on the bad aspects, but i found it really enjoyable to read. If author could fix some points, it would be wonderful. I added this to my library and will be following it, its a good fic and i haven't seen one about GOT yet.