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2020-07-27 20:00

To be fair, the main reason I give this a full score is because we're still only at the start. So much can still go wrong. But so far, it's great. I'd give writing quality a 4.5 if I could(occasional spelling errors etc). But it's still very much readable, and the general grammar is great. We will see if I have to change my mind about the score in the future. But for now, I enjoy it quite a bit. And curse that there are no more chapters to read.

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