I felt the longing and the message of the novel was delivered smoothly to me. Every word hits different and it's so deep. It moves my heart in agony. For the technicalities, separate some paragraphs and don't miss the punctuations. Great start author!

It's a serene, beautiful yet captivating story about love...the author makes the boys' struggle against fate across different lifetimes feel real even though it is a very out-worldly concept... Great and relatable characters...beautifully sculpted. The first few chapters are a little confusing on what is going on, probably because of the long paragraphs. Story's a hidden gem...waiting to be read.

Ok, so I will be truthful here. I just finish reading the first chapter, the grammar is great though I was confuse on what is happening on quite a few lines because it contains a lot of words and sadly I can't follow. But, oh well It looks good anyway. it's just the first chapter still quite a lot to check out. Imma continue reading

wow, a very interesting storyline. i think this is the first of it's kind that i have read. very detailed in its description. captivating back stories. this invokes emotions in the readers. i hope to see more updates. keep it up

I'm greatly enjoying what the first opening chapters have brought. The investment for the characters haven't peeked yet for me, as is, I do look forward on that changing. Same for world build. Overall, this has been a neat look and I can't wait to come back for more.

A comfortable read this is, as the story makes great use of language in order to invoke imagery and emotion to the reader. I personally enjoyed reading as it gave me the time and opportunity to see how the story develops overtime.

Very nice story indeed, I had the urge to read the 10 chapters. I would say probably be more descriptive on the writing so I can feel the feelings of the peoople

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Interesting characters with equally intriguing backstories. Would love to learn more about them as time passes by! Beautifully written to convey emotions, and I see a lot of potential in this work!