Review Detail of BrazilNobAutor in Dragon ball: God Sayajin
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[N/A]:This is the first time that I write something like this. English may be a little bad for those who are native speakers of it, as it is not my language and I use the translator and some applications to fix most errors (It sucks because I do everything on my cell phone). So anyone who has one constructive or critical idea are welcome.
Dragon ball: God Sayajin
BrazilNobAutor
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You are doing a great job with the story buddy. But please improve your MC as he has all the knowledge that he needs to be strong, but he's still behaving like a beta male. Improve his character he behaves like a idiots, for f*cks sake he's an ***** in child's body. At least Let him use the martial arts knowledge that he has to properly fight. Other than that Keep it up Buddy 😉👍👍
NULL_SAN:You are doing a great job with the story buddy. But please improve your MC as he has all the knowledge that he needs to be strong, but he's still behaving like a beta male. Improve his character he behaves like a idiots, for f*cks sake he's an ***** in child's body. At least Let him use the martial arts knowledge that he has to properly fight. Other than that Keep it up Buddy 😉👍👍