Hi guys! Author here. This review will serve as a guide to everyone who wants to read my novel. 1. Writing - I'm using a third-person omniscient point of view most of the time but in other cases, I'm using a first-person omniscient point of view. Another thing, I'm also using both present tense and past tense in my storytelling. 2. Updates - I'll try to post one chapter per day from now on. 3. Story development - There will be a lot of questions about the story that won't be revealed right away because this is also a mystery novel. The MC will be thrown to various situations he is not ready for and will be forced to adapt 4. Character - there will be a lot of interesting characters that were inspired by anime characters, manhwa, light novels, series, etc. The MC is a passive introverted thinker character that a lot of you can relate to. And since he's passive, some of you might find it boring that he's not reacting that much. He is a weird character that's all I can say. 5. World Background - It's just like ours, aside from it has one Ruler/President/Emperor only which is called World Monarchy. But that's before the 10th World Monarch and a Catastrophe that ruined the world. Please enjoy reading my novel. If you do like it, please leave a review or comments, and vote with power stones. Also, join our discord server. The link is in the synopsis. Thank you so much.
Nocturnal_Dreamer
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LIKELuciferVermillion:I suggest you need to change the cover or find an artist to do a cover. It pains me to see Tokita Ohma in Advanced mode from Kengan Asura as your work's cover page.
No to harem. Romance? Hmm, maybe before the novel ends. There are no female characters on the first 40 chaps too.
CrimsonPhoenix:will there be romance or harem cause personally I don't like harem and I rather not read just to have it turn into one and waste my time
Nocturnal_Dreamer:No to harem. Romance? Hmm, maybe before the novel ends. There are no female characters on the first 40 chaps too.
Mostly, the MC will investigate things by himself with the help of the system. But there would be some instances where the MC would cross path with an important old man.
Day_OPM:is there a spirit grandpa in this I cant really tell with the synopsis really dont like the hidden op guy telling the mc what to do
okay cool thought he had a spirit grandpa inside his body but if it's just sensei,s that come through that's cool
Nocturnal_Dreamer:Mostly, the MC will investigate things by himself with the help of the system. But there would be some instances where the MC would cross path with an important old man.
crimsonitaci:question: why do many books have blocked chapters?
Nocturnal_Dreamer:No to harem. Romance? Hmm, maybe before the novel ends. There are no female characters on the first 40 chaps too.
My story was certainly R-18 because it contains gore scenes and has a lot of mature, dark sides as the story progress. I don't know about the harem though. My MC was straight up loyal despite not being romantic.
Boobaslurper:i don't know what happen, but your book appear on harem and R-18 tag search list
Nocturnal_Dreamer:My story was certainly R-18 because it contains gore scenes and has a lot of mature, dark sides as the story progress. I don't know about the harem though. My MC was straight up loyal despite not being romantic.