Review Detail of 0K0 in The Eternal battle

(As of chapter 58) Writing Quality (3) - there are may grammatical errors, wrong spelling and horrible sentence structure. The style of the author does not resonate with thus it always break my immersion with. You need to edit the early chapters author-nim. Story Development (4) - first time seeing a urban cultivation novel that I really like the progression of the story amaze me to this point. It is not slow in my opinion (I like slow novels with steady power ups) and it is not a fast paced story too. The plot and turning points is reasonable in my opinion for it has reasons on why did he do that? What would he get from doing that action? And many more. Character Design (4) - The character of the story at first is emotional but as that sin worm crawled out form his mouth(I think?) he regains his emotion. Its refreshing to see him ge frustrated about something and thinks about something not in a rational way. Update stability (5) - Well I'm just catching up and it has a 300+ chapters and I'm a slow reader because I read the novel in detail so it will be long way to go before I catch up. World building (5) - well the author has great ideas for his world and has introduce us a plenty of superpowers in the world that the MC is residing in. Thought- overall a great story. Had a bad writing but it can be fixed. One of the best urban novels that I read and I hope it will stay the same(the only novel that I read in urban genre is this hihi). The pace of the story is OK for me and the character development for me is a bit sudden but still bearable. And I think that's it. Good job Author a good novel this is(I know it's grammatically wrong).