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This book is absolutely recommended for those who love sci-fi and super hero stuffs. The details of the Galaxy and the new planet is just WoW. The descriptions of the missions and the fact that the MC is responsible and mature enough despite his age is something great I find here. Well, I won't spoil the new readers more. Read more to find out 😄. As for the grammar, there are very few typos and mistakes. Some tenses needs correction and and punctuations are missing. But I would highly recommend to edit the first and the second chapter. I have given the details in the comments of those chapters. Apart from that, the story concept itself is great. I would love to learn more as the unfolds. Totally worth it and with a new interesting plot. I have already added your book to my library (^^).

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Dead Invasion: The Cursed Ordeal

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Thank you, I'll definitely pay heed to your words and I'll surely edit my chapters.