Review Detail of Demonic_Ogre in Earthland's Gamer

Item: Earthland's Gamer
Rating: 3.8

Review detail

Demonic_OgreLv43yrDemonic_Ogre

ehhh... I don't really like how the story developed especially at the very beginning , character hasn't really been built yet... not much detail about the world but overall I'm just too picky. It's good for being your, i think first novel?

Earthland's Gamer

1dope4

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1dope4Author1dope4

Not really my first since I did try writing about a year ago, which ended up in a failure. I wrote exactly two chapter before going "This **** is too hard for me" and bailing out. But thanks for the review, now I have a better idea on what I should improve.

3yr

Demonic_OgreLv4Demonic_Ogre

keep up the good work!

1dope4:Not really my first since I did try writing about a year ago, which ended up in a failure. I wrote exactly two chapter before going "This **** is too hard for me" and bailing out. But thanks for the review, now I have a better idea on what I should improve.

3yr

1dope4Author1dope4

Aye, sir!

Demonic_Ogre:keep up the good work!

3yr