I'm seriously gobsmacked that this novel made it in the paid chapters category with this level of English, although I love this genre I can't really read more than half the chap without getting dizzy trying to understand what's written....please before making people pay for something like this atleast get a decent editor, there's no need for perfect English but atleast separate the paragraphs and sentences.
DanielBR
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