Item: The Zombie Attack Begins
Rating: 2.4
Author: fegzzxc

fegzzxcLv133yr

2021-02-25 02:34

At first it was good but then it started to be more hard to comprehend even more when it's hard to know when someone talk or think , it was changed but still it was only with [] to say that someone is talking nothing else changed. don't get me wrong the story is not bad and the grammar is still ok but the fact that there no logic to the stories is the main reasonni stop. since it seems like some god helped him or chosed him them in less than one month he go to another planet . and he change so fast that it isn't natural like if a 18 years teenager will be so quick to adapt even if he has read novel of apocalypse

The Zombie Attack Begins

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