Review Detail of Delphonse in A System for the Prince of Darkness
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A shameless review of the series from the creator! I had an idea for a story that I think could really go far. I have a ton of ideas for it so far so please make sure to vote for it and read it I think you will enjoy this series!
A System for the Prince of Darkness
Delphonse
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Can you change the synopsis or stop including the chapters with the kobold in kazs human life. I see no point in those chapters in the story's progression. Also in the synopsis it only talks about Kaz, not the snippets of a kobold seeing modern life. It kind of kills the story for me, because I am just expecting kazs side of life and then bam filler chapter from Fritz in Kazs old body....
Delphonse:It's very likely but I don't want to spoil to much! ^.^
FrightKnight88:Can you change the synopsis or stop including the chapters with the kobold in kazs human life. I see no point in those chapters in the story's progression. Also in the synopsis it only talks about Kaz, not the snippets of a kobold seeing modern life. It kind of kills the story for me, because I am just expecting kazs side of life and then bam filler chapter from Fritz in Kazs old body....
No prob. Sorry if I was harsh. Probably wouldn't have been as annoyed or even may not have been annoyed at all if I knew those would be there beforehand
Delphonse:Yea I should update the synopsis that is a good idea thanks for reminding me ^.^
I am actually going to rewrite the entire fritz story because I've been writing on the fly but now I know what I want to do with fritz xD
FrightKnight88:No prob. Sorry if I was harsh. Probably wouldn't have been as annoyed or even may not have been annoyed at all if I knew those would be there beforehand
Sweet. I didnt really see where that was going so it just kinda felt like useless lore. But if it actually impacts the story then that's cool
Delphonse:I am actually going to rewrite the entire fritz story because I've been writing on the fly but now I know what I want to do with fritz xD