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This story is brilliant! I went in not expecting such a vividly descriptive detective story. It doesn't even feel like I'm reading a webnovel, I felt like i was reading an actual book which goes to show how much thought and effort author has put into writing the scenery and background. It feels like an old detective story I'd watch on tv. That introduction was very powerful, it set the scene of the novel right from the start and hooked me to continue reading. Although the progress of the plot is a bit slow it doesn't get boring, its expected to build the background though some readers would not like this. It does tend to get a bit wordy. I'd recommend author break up huge paragraphs of text into two or three smaller ones, most readers get scared when the see so much text right at the start. Otherwise, there is no real errors or typo or misplaced word. Everything written seems to have a set purpose to the plot whether its setting up a new character or visualising a scene. Very good job done. I don't know if author has watched the movie called Knives out. Its also about a bestselling author who was murdered. He calls in a detective to investigate right after his death and turns out his family was behind it. I recommend checking it out if author has time, I think you'll like it 😀

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Thank you😊