Review Detail of anntsu in Let Me Make You a Star

At the moment, there’s only 11 chapters, so I can’t say much. The author’s writing has good grammar, the story is easy to follow, and there’s a clear goal for the MC. However, I feel that the MC’s emotions should be more developed; more descriptions and insights on what he’s thinking and feeling, especially since his experiences in just the first three chapters are really life-changing (being fired, cheated on, and going back in time). I don’t feel a particular connection with the MC, but I think there’s a lot of potential with the current plot and showbiz idea. I look forward to reading! Thanks and good luck to the author <3