Review Detail of MysticAmy in Villainess of Hearts

I am three chapters in, but I already decided to leave a review. I like the writing quality of this novel and how formal and at the same time entertaining this is! I may be an English teacher, but this is not a basis for me to say that I am great as I am fully aware to how other people can do better when it comes to narration and choice of words! 🤩 TBH, my style is simple and reading other authors’ work such as yours, helps me learn a lot of things! 🥰 Keep it up! I really like your figure of speeches and word choices~! And especially the FLOW and with how you described each scenes is remarkable! Update stability is good. I can really see you working hard, as you write for other stories as well~! I am still three chapters in, but I like the story development in this one. I could already say that your pacing would be good since we had a very exciting start that left us hanging and on the next chapters, we could already see the progress of how the story will be. I would have to read more so I could follow up on this part of the review. ^^ I absolutely LOVE the character design! 🤩 As your own version of the fairytale, this is something indeed unique to you which is a good share for the other readers! I love reading classics and you adding some characters to the story is a good take on your story! 🥰 Lastly, World Background. TBH, I would still have to read more so I could say something about this. Once I do, I would have to edit or recomment on my review. Overall, Rachel, I like the book and I would really continue reading this during my free time along with Moon Rabbit! 🥰 Keep up the it up! You’re already doing great and I know your works will be enjoyed by many! 🤩