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2020-10-22 08:13

Would have to give a 5 for this novel. the flow and the storytelling is superb in my opinion. I enjoy reading it like I'm with the character in her journey hehe. Just be careful with occasional slips like pronouns 'he' instead of 'she' but it's very minor. (I'm also guilty of it) I cannot emphasize how much I like how her friend's name is Fabulous. 😅🤭🤩 Great job, author!

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Thanks dear. I will do my best to correct my errors

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