No spoiler. Reading Status: C31
The quality of writing, at a general level, can be improved, with one or another error out there but without affecting the level of comprehensibility. It is quite easy, and this is refreshing, to imagine what is happening as you read, however more details can be added, and descriptions can be polished. Sight is not the only way to experience the world. Sometimes more words can sound boring and irrelevant, but here they would come in handy to increase the general conceptualization of the reader and make everything more dynamic, especially in scenes that require ... more imagination. 4/5
The stability of the story is consistent, it can be expected as a sweet caramel that without a doubt is and will be addictive, so with patience comes the taste. 5/5 for me, patience is a virtue.
The development of the story is quite consistent with respect to the tags and the synopsis itself. I have found what it would be like to find myself and I loved that. You can expect a not boring reading as long as you are not too demanding, I mean, it is not perfect but for someone of my tastes it is enough to have a smile at the end. A good work on culture, despite the fact that there are many ideas to develop, the quality does not diminish as long as you do not dig in the sand, which works for me. 5/5
Character design in such a work is to be expected, so let's not be evasive. Sometimes they can feel somewhat flat and simple, as if they were cut with the same scissors, or even if you see it from a certain perspective they can seem forced, of course if you read things similar enough to themes such as those discussed in this you will not be disappointed too much, on the contrary it will be something habitual and it will not suppose a negative point for the rest. Now, obviously there is room for improvement, but it is a matter of time, because the more words to read, the more constructed the characters will be ... although in any case they can sometimes become too complex or annoying, depending on the reader. 4/5
The World Background can be considered typical as something of this genre, but it can still come to seem somewhat bland. Personally I would like an improvement in the background, in the sense of being more detailed and descriptive, obviously without being too heavy with the information dump. Sometimes it is difficult for me to get a general idea, although the meaning of the actions and their aims is clear to me. A little more geographical information would be appreciated, it is difficult for me to imagine the world and the different forces that develop in it. I am looking forward to the scenes of war and epic battles. In particular to see much more kingdombuilding, my favorite subgenre. 4/5
In general terms, if you are someone with direct tastes, this story will not disappoint you as long as you do not overlap those small stabs in the side with the great treasure that you have in front of you. A casual read for fun, especially since there will be no NTR, that disgusting thing that makes me lose faith in humanity.
The effort is appreciated and I wish you the best in your private life so that you can continue to create the great story you put on wheels.
